Jazmin, well done for doing such detailed research and looking at so many examples of real music videos. You are quite clear on theme and the role of performance / lip synch. You don't analyse technical elements such as editing or camera in enough detail and you use incorrect terminology-- e.g. high key / low key camera??? Check this please. You are not always clear enough on how the case study inspires you / gives you ideas. Please make these changes and see me for more detailed feedback if you need to. Vanessa
Jazmin, well done for doing such detailed research and looking at so many examples of real music videos. You are quite clear on theme and the role of performance / lip synch. You don't analyse technical elements such as editing or camera in enough detail and you use incorrect terminology-- e.g. high key / low key camera??? Check this please. You are not always clear enough on how the case study inspires you / gives you ideas. Please make these changes and see me for more detailed feedback if you need to.
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